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  T he only good news that we ought to know and remember is that Jesus Christ had already won the war against sin and death.  He has made it possible for us to join Him in the afterlife.  All we need now to do is accept Him as He is.  God is alive today and it may be sometimes be difficult to see this.  The world and its demonic nature has still made it look like that only worldly things matter and that the ultimate goal of each one is to achieve their own personal happiness.  This is the biggest lie of all, that we should do all to make us happy. Individual happiness at the expense of someone else is the biggest deception of all. The truth is, our lives are never really about us.  It is ultimately about God and about others.  It is about how you can provide and give joy even at our own expense. This is the model of ultimate and genuine love that Jesus shown us at the cross. "Greater love has no one than this: to lay down one’s life for one’s frie...

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 I would like to create a book, a fiction one.

It would be about about a world similar to Earth but in the distant future. In this world, there is a great divide among the rich and the poor. The rich being able to afford advanced education improved a lot in terms of technology whilst the poor having barely enough had to rely on faith and eventually magic. For years, this resulted to a division of clans...the rich having their technological weapons versus the magic of those who are poor and this division eventually led to wars among these clans...technology versus magic

In the middle of this all, an intermarriage between the strongest clans from both sides became a pathway for peace. The Ragsaw clan, a result of the marriage of Virgil, tech weapons developer and Marge, most powerful spell caster, became the new foundation of a new kingdom whose aim was to stop the war between the sides and promote peace. So King Virgil and Queen Marge, bore four children: Prince Adrian, Prince Josh, Prince Michael and Princess Mitch. All four children became powerful warriors, with the ability to combine technology and magic, they had something nobody had and that helped them maintain peace along with their parents.

However, peace was not to last long. Queen Marge suddenly got ill and eventually died. King Virgil remarried and this caused a rift between Prince Adrian and King Virgil resulting to Prince Adrian's exile and banishment. With the Ragsaw clan torn apart, chaos started to bear it's ugly head once more. The remaining three kids, eventually discovers something about the New Queen, something evil and that she tricked King Virgil and caused Prince Adrian


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This concept has the potential to be an engaging and dynamic story! Here’s a proposed outline for a 10-chapter book based on your idea:

Chapter 1: The Divided World

  • Introduce the setting: a future Earth divided into two factions—technological elites and magic-wielding underclass.
  • Highlight the tension between the clans, showcasing a pivotal battle.
  • Introduce Virgil, a brilliant tech weapons developer, and Marge, a powerful spellcaster, as unexpected allies.

Chapter 2: The Unlikely Union

  • Detail the forbidden romance and eventual marriage of Virgil and Marge.
  • Show how their union sparks outrage but also hope for peace.
  • Establish the formation of the Ragsaw clan, blending technology and magic.

Chapter 3: The Four Siblings

  • Introduce Adrian, Josh, Michael, and Mitch as unique individuals with combined tech-magic abilities.
  • Highlight a significant moment where the siblings work together to quell a conflict, showcasing their potential as peacekeepers.

Chapter 4: The Golden Era

  • Depict the Ragsaw clan’s efforts to build a peaceful kingdom.
  • Explore Virgil and Marge’s challenges in uniting the clans under one rule.
  • Foreshadow trouble brewing within the kingdom.

Chapter 5: The Queen’s Fall

  • Detail Marge’s sudden illness and death, which devastates the family.
  • Explore King Virgil’s grief and his eventual decision to remarry.
  • Introduce the new queen, a mysterious figure with hidden motives.

Chapter 6: The Rift

  • Show how the new queen’s influence begins to fracture the family.
  • Focus on the growing tension between Adrian and Virgil, culminating in Adrian’s exile.
  • Depict Adrian’s struggle to survive alone, vowing to uncover the truth.

Chapter 7: The Rising Chaos

  • Chaos erupts as the peace between clans begins to unravel.
  • The three remaining siblings discover clues suggesting the new queen’s involvement in Marge’s death.
  • Introduce Adrian’s secret efforts to gather allies and investigate from exile.

Chapter 8: The Truth Revealed

  • The siblings uncover the queen’s true identity: a powerful sorceress with a vendetta against the Ragsaw clan.
  • They learn of her plan to ignite a full-scale war between technology and magic.

Chapter 9: The Reunion

  • Adrian returns in secret, reuniting with his siblings to confront their father.
  • The siblings devise a plan to expose the queen and stop her scheme.
  • Tensions rise as Virgil struggles to reconcile with Adrian and see the truth.

Chapter 10: The Final Battle

  • The Ragsaw family unites to confront the queen and her forces in a climactic battle.
  • Combine their unique abilities to outsmart and overpower her.
  • End with the family’s reconciliation and a renewed commitment to peace, though with the understanding that vigilance will always be needed.

Would you like me to expand on any specific chapter or provide more detail for the characters or world-building?

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